This is good and narrated quite well, I think. Still, 6 weeks of working out and she can do all that? Hmmm, very fast gainer, I'd say. Also, I don't think her husband would have so quickly dismissed her and been laughing with his "girl friend" after being so confronted by his wife, with her new physique, in the next room just a moment before. Apart from the questionable storyline, though, what I want to hear most is LVB narrating! Narrating her own stories, would be best. Just take classic fairy tales, like Little Red Riding Hood, and change some of the details. Make Little Red a young bodybuilder who entices the wolf into Granny's bed only to crush his rib cage and bite off his ears under the snuggly covers! Let him crawl away in pain only to be kicked around day after day in the forrest thereafter by Little Red while on her way to Granny's. Hey, that'd make a cool animated film. Could even turn the wolf into her grandfather (who some say the wolf actually represents in this classic story).

Oh, I see LVB DOES narrate some of the stories! Yey!! I'm THERE! So cool.